Wednesday, November 20, 2013

How to Write a Haiku



What is haiku?

Haiku is a Japanese poetry form. A haiku uses just a few words to capture a moment and create a picture in the reader's mind. It is like a tiny window into a scene much larger than itself.


Traditionally, haiku is written in three lines, with five syllables in the first line, seven syllables in the second line, and five syllables in the third line. 

Haiku examples
 
Here's a haiku poem written by a poetry student:

The last winter leaves
Clinging to the black branches
Explode into birds.


Characteristics of haiku

The following are typical of haiku:
  • A focus on nature.
  • A "season word" such as "snow" which tells the reader what time of year it is.
  • A division somewhere in the poem, which focuses first on one thing, than on another. The relationship between these two parts is sometimes surprising.
  • Instead of saying how a scene makes him or her feel, the poet shows the details that caused that emotion. If the sight of an empty winter sky made the poet feel lonely, describing that sky can give the same feeling to the reader.
How to write a haiku - try it!
You can use the pictures lower down on this page to give you ideas. In your haiku, try to use details related to the senses -- sight, hearing, touch, smell, or taste. 


Or look out your window, and describe what you see. Try to "zoom in" on a small detail that contains the feeling of the larger scene.

Or follow the steps below to write a "surprise-ending haiku." This is based on an exercise from the poet Ron Patchett which is described in The Haiku Handbook by William J. Higginson:
  1. Write two lines about something beautiful in nature. You can use the pictures below to give you ideas. Don't worry about counting syllables yet.
  2. Write a third line that is a complete surprise, that is about something completely different from the first two lines.
  3. Look at the three lines together. Does the combination of these two seemingly unrelated parts suggest any surprising relationships? Does it give you any interesting ideas?
  4. Now rewrite the poem, using the 5-syllable, 7-syllable, 5-syllable format and experimenting with the new ideas or perspectives that have occurred to you.
http://www.creative-writing-now.com/how-to-write-a-haiku.html

14 comments:

  1. Name :Arman Magati
    Class : B
    NIM :1212150055

    Example of Haiku poem :

    The wind does blow
    Across the three, I see the Animal
    The flowers blooms

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  2. Name : Christopley
    NIM : 1212150054
    Class : B

    Cold and quiet in winter
    Snow comes and covers me
    Freezing and alone here

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  3. Name : Adelina Fransiska
    NIM : 1212150049
    Class : B

    This is my haiku poem, ma'am.

    Today I feel weather hot
    People need water to flushing flower
    Then frlower will branch out

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  4. Name : Bintang ahad
    NIM : 1212150057
    Class : B

    The water was wet
    I can see fresh flowers became
    Waiting so many bitle

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  5. Name : Elisa Tumiar Jayanty Pasaribu
    Class : III / A
    S.I.N : 1212150060

    Ma'am, this is my haiku....

    Soft cloud in the sky (5)
    Cool and fresh in the green forest (7)
    Combine with the birds song (5)

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  7. Name : Daniel
    Class : BS A
    SIN : 1212150019

    The forest

    The place is protected
    You are hearts in the world
    and you are my blood

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  8. Name : Jeany Ariestya Raiman
    NIM : 12 121 500 18
    Class : A

    Twilight is coming
    Wolf running through the forest
    Ready for hunting

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  9. Name : Angga Putra Alam
    NIM : 1212150004
    Class : BS/ III A

    The Tittle is " The WaterFall"

    The water is so cold
    The air is so fresh for me
    I am happy see it.

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  10. Name : Dwi Suryaningrum
    Nim : 1212150002
    class : BS / III A

    The sun is orange colour
    It gives a lot of light
    which helps our plants grow

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  11. Name : Septi Yanti
    NIM : 12 121 500 41
    Class : III B


    A cricket disturberd them
    The sleeping child, on the porch
    A man smoke smile

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  12. Name : Ervinna Hutapea
    Nim : 1212150021
    Class : lll 1

    Birds
    How great it can fly
    Always singing with all trees
    Is it part of mystery?

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  13. Name : Cheterina Noya
    NIM : 1212150035
    Class : BS/ III A

    An old man muse,
    he thought about his wife
    cring,cring,cringgggggg!!! little smile in his face

    The super women
    she run away
    she could help everyone soon

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  14. Name: Maria Ignantia
    SIN :1212150028
    Class A
    A dark night city
    A girl was walked in street
    Wow good dark night

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