Rhyme schemes and sound effects
Rhyme is an important tool in the
poet's toolbox. Traditional poetry forms such as sonnets often use rhyme in
specific patterns. But even if you are writing free verse, you can use rhyme to
when it helps you create desired effects.
Rhyme schemes - why rhyme
There are many reasons why you might
choose to use rhyme:
- To give pleasure. Rhyme, done well, is pleasing to the
ear. It adds a musical element to the poem, and creates a feeling of
"rightness," of pieces fitting together. It also makes a poem
easier to memorize, since the rhyme echoes in the reader's mind afterward,
like a melody.
- To deepen meaning. Rhyming two or more words draws
attention to them and connects them in the reader's mind.
- To strengthen form. In many traditional forms, a
regular pattern of rhymes are at the ends of the lines. This means that
even if the poem is being read out loud, listeners can easily hear where
the lines end, can hear the shape of the poem.
Rhyme schemes - internal rhymes and
end rhymes
When the last word in a line of
poetry rhymes with the last word in another line, this is called an end
rhyme. Many traditional poetry forms use end rhymes.
When words in the middle of a line
of poetry rhyme with each other, this is called an internal rhyme. Below
is part of a poem by Samuel Taylor Coleridge. Can you find the internal rhymes
and end rhymes?
The fair breeze blew, the white foam
flew,
The furrow followed free;
We were the first that ever burst
Into that silent sea.
In this example,
"blew"-"flew," and "first"-"burst" are
internal rhymes. "Free" and "sea" are end rhymes.
Rhyme schemes - true rhymes and
off-rhymes
"Smart" and
"art"; "fellow" and "yellow"; "surgery"
and perjury" -- these are all examples of true rhymes, or exact
rhymes because the final vowel and consonant sounds (or the final syllables
in the longer words) are exact matches to the ear.
"Fate" and
"saint"; "work" and "spark"; are examples of off-rhymes,
or slant-rhymes. In each case, part of the sound matches exactly, but
part of it doesn't. Off-rhymes use assonance and consonance:
- Assonance is a similarity between vowel sounds (the
sounds made by your breath, written with the letters a,e,i,o,u,and
sometimes y) "Sing,"lean", and "beet" are an
example of assonance because they all have a similar "e" sound.
Another example is "boat,"bone", and "mole,"
which all have a similiar "o" sound.
- Consonance is a similarity between consonant sounds
(consonants are the letters that you pronounce with your lips or tongue,
not with your breath: b,c,d,f,g,h,j,k,l,m,n,p,q,r,s,t,v,w,x,z and
sometimes y). "Lake,"book", and "back" are an
example of consonance because they all have the same "K" sounds,
even though the vowel sounds in these words are different. When the same
consonants are used at the beginning of the word (for example, the words
"sing" and "sell"), that is called alliteration.
You might choose to use off-rhymes
instead of true rhymes, or in addition to them, to create a subtler effect.
Using off-rhymes also gives you more
choices of words to rhyme. This often makes it possible to create more original
or surprising rhymes. How many pop songs can you think of that rhyme
"heart" with "apart?" And when you hear the words
"heaven above" in a song, you can bet that the word "love"
is lurking nearby. There are only a few words that rhyme with "love,"
so they are used over and over again. Off-rhymes can help to remove some of
that predictability so that you can come up with more interesting rhyme.
Rhyme schemes
The pattern of rhymes in a poem is
written with the letters a, b, c, d, etc. The first set of lines that rhyme at
the end are marked with a. The second set are marked with b. So,
in a poem with the rhyme scheme abab, the first line rhymes with the third line,
and the second line rhymes with the fourth line. In a poem with the rhyme
scheme abcb, the second line rhymes with the fourth line, but the first and
third lines don't rhyme with each other.
Here's an example of an abab rhyme
scheme from a poem by Robert Herrick:
GATHER ye rosebuds while ye may,
Old Time is still a-flying:
And this same flower that smiles to-day
To-morrow will be dying.
Here's an example of an abcb rhyme
scheme.
The itsy bitsy spider (a)
Went up the water spout (b)
Down came the rain (c)
And washed the spider out (b)
This one's aabccb:
Little Miss Muffet
Sat on a tuffet
Eating her curds and whey.
Along came a spider
And sat down beside her
And frightened Miss Muffett away.
Here's a sonnet by Shakespeare. The
rhyme scheme is abab cdcd efef gg.
My mistress' eyes are nothing like
the sun; (a)
Coral is far more red than her lips' red; (b)
If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun;(a)
If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head.(b)
I have seen roses damask'd, red and white,(c)
But no such roses see I in her cheeks;(d)
And in some perfumes is there more delight(c)
Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks.(d)
I love to hear her speak, yet well I know (e)
That music hath a far more pleasing sound; (f)
I grant I never saw a goddess go; (e)
My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground: (f)
And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare (g)
As any she belied with false compare. (g)
Can you figure out the rhyme scheme
in this limerick by Edward Lear (1812-1888)? (Answer below):
There was an old man of the coast
Who placidly sat on a post
But when it was cold
He relinquished his hold
And called for some hot buttered toast.
(Answer: aabba)
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